Feedback and Reflection

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I’m super pleased with the feedback I have received in regards to my coursework and outcome of Assignment 1. It’s really helpful to have guidance and input into what I could work on and what I did well. I feel encouraged to be less harsh on myself, as I wasn’t expecting the feedback to be so positive. I’m quite firm on myself, so to have such encouraging feedback was a relief.

I’ve taken a lot of pointers from the things that my tutor fed back to me, and I’m motivated to persevere with my choices and adapt my skills in certain areas.

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Positive feedback points:

• Medium extension
• Pressure of contact on page
• My sketchbook use
• The reflectiveness within my writing
• Planning regarding Assignment 1
• Attention to tone, form and subject

Things that I will be focusing on in future work are:

• Creating more thumbnails in practice for larger pieces
• Not to rely on outlines to form an object
• Not to be too harsh on myself in regards to my style of work and my downfalls
• Ellipse practice
• Less smudging when shading

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